Sep 282009
 
My son says, "I like the inventions and guessing what they are.  I can't wait for the next one.  Also, they don't take very long."

My son says, "I like the inventions and guessing what they are. I can't wait for the next one. Also, they don't take very long."

Reminiscant of the one room school house, where the teacher would write a sentence to be corrected on the blackboard, The Great Editing Adventure series provides adventures that reviews grammar daily in this similar fashion.

There are 3 adventure stories in vol. 1 that review grammar, writing mechanics, spelling, vocabulary, finding synonyms and dictionary use.  Each day you read a new sentence as you write it on a board, or use the student workbook (which I prefer) that already has the sentence written for you.  Then my child takes a few minutes to correct the errors.  I like to give the number of errors to look for.  And, if it’s a hard one, I will give them a hint.

The Great Editing Adventure is great for daily drills because they are a quick way to develop editing skills in a fun manner.  They also provide the opportunity to talk about grammar, spelling and writing in a contextual way.  My children start caring about the story and are eager to find the mistakes!

The added bonus of synonyms and vocabulary words is easy to use and all-in-all this takes about 10 minutes a day.  I recommend this for children beginning in grade 4 or above, with a prior grammar background.  You can also alternate years doing a grammar text one year and Great Editing Adventure as review the following year.

Someone pointed out to me a long time ago that there is only so much grammar to learn.  Many grammar texts simply repeat the same thing over and over which makes for “busy work”.  Learning grammar is simply preparing a child to speak and write correctly.  I like to alternate our focus each year between grammar and writing, and Great Editing Adventure is a great tool to help me achieve this goal.

Click here for a sample teacher page.

Click here for a sample student workbook page.

Written by Brenda, a classically eclectic mother of five.  You can find her blogging at Tie That Binds Us about her homeschooling journey and family traditions.

Aug 192009
 

Why should you give your children regular editing and proofreading exercises as part of their language arts studies?

  1. Editing exercises teach them how read critically for errors. Hopefully, those skills will  carry over into their own writing as they go through the drafting, revising, and editing steps of the writing process.
  2. Editing exercises are the best way to teach grammar and usage – in the context of real writing, versus the forced situation of a textbook activity.
Daily Paragraph Editing

Daily Paragraph Editing (Grade 5) by Evan Moor

In an ideal world, mom would select a literature passage from something her child is studying, make some changes, and have the child find the errors. But few of us have time to do that each day. That’s why I love Daily Paragraph Editing by Evan Moor.

Daily Paragraph Editing is available in printed format or ebook format. (I get mine from CurrClick and download it immediately. Then I print out the pages I need each week.) You also have the option of a less expensive student workbook if you feel confident that you don’t need the answer keys. There is a book for each grade 2-6.

Each book has 36 weeks of lessons, each week with four paragraphs, all centered on a certain theme. The themes vary from academic to daily topics, for example baseball, eating pizza, George Washington Carver, or John Muir.  Each paragraph takes up half of a page, and the suggested corrections are on a separate page. On the student’s portion, there is a hint telling them what type of corrections to especially watch for. But the errors are not limited to that one thing. If you want to know exactly what errors to look for, refer to the Skills Scope and Sequence chart offered in each Daily Paragraph Editing volume. On the fifth day of the week, the student can use the list of weekly writing topics, each of which is a continuation of the weekly theme.

Because you’re doing a short editing practice each day, even these toughest punctuation rules are going to finally sink in through the repetition. And for some reason, students find it more enjoyable to look for capitalization problems in some one else’s work rather than to learn a capitalization lesson. But you can use the editing practice as a springboard to those types of mini lessons.

Suggestions for Using Daily Paragraph Editing

  • Give the child the passage, and have him read it. Reading aloud is preferable, because doing so often helps him catch errors, especially with punctuation, fragments, and run-on sentences.
  • Make sure he understands the passage before making the corrections. Take time to discuss any new terms or ideas.
  • Give him time with a “red pen” and the passage, using standard proofreading marks to indicate his corrections directly onto the passage.  (The book even includes a chart of proofreading marks  at the front of the book.)
  • Check his corrections against the ones on the answer key. I actually go sentence by sentence, making my daughter tell me what correction she made and why. If she doesn’t know why, then we refer to a writer’s handbook for the grammar or usage rule. The book itself includes a short language handbook with rules for writing and editing. This is a great opportunity for a mini grammar lesson.
  • You can record any errors that were missed on the Skills Scope and Sequence chart. As you see patterns emerging, you can stop and do more intensive grammar or mechanics lessons.

Remember that the corrections are not always written in stone. English is flexible, and there are often many ways to correct a problem. So be willing to consider alternative corrections. As long as the passage is free from error, the student has successfully edited it.